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Lovely Rose 2

Chapter 1

My name is Flash Rose, I'm the son of Sonic the hedgehog and Amy Rose. I'm 14 years old and so very hot LOL! Well my whole story started when I met Tamaria Vaz, she was the most beauiful girl that I've ever met. She sometimes get an attidtude with others mostly me, sometimes I wonder if she likes me or not, I've had ask her out and few times but my anwser is always no.
One day I was headed to my best friend Evain house which it her old brother, we've been friends since we're babies. On my way there I almost past by a rose bush and I remember what my dad always sain" To get the girl give a rose" so I did, I pick it up and headed down the streets very fast. About 5 sec later I made it to her house, there was Mrs. Vaz her mother was in the garden, she say me and said......

Mel: Flash, hello dear...

Flash: Hello Mrs. Vaz is Evain home?

Mel: Yes he's inside....come on in dear...

Flash: Thank you

I followed her inside there I saw Evain infront of the TV playing his Xbox. I sneak up behind him and scared him, then her hit me on the head. Then his older sis Maria came down stairs followed by Tamaira when I saw her I blush. she was wearin her dark purple pants and with magenta top with a purple skull in the middle.

Maria: Hey Flash

Flash: Hey*looks at Tamaria &blush* He...hello Tamaira

Tamaria: Hey*looks the other way*

Flash: You look nice today

Tamaria: Thanks......MAMA!

Mel: Yes Mihija

Tamaria: Can I go to Lily's house

Mel: Will ok but be careful

Tamaria: I will

Flash: Your going to my place

Lily's is my lil sis, she and Tamaria are best friends, she and her are punk but sometimes I think Lily's a devil. Since Tamaria is going to my place then hey why do I take her there, thats the only way to her to out with me.

Tamaria: Yeah I am

Flash: May I take you there?

Tamaria: Uh...no thanks I'll be fine

Flash: Are you sure....its a lot faster with me.

Tamaria: I said No Thanks*heads out*

As she left I was disappointed, so I went to join Evain to play the game. Then Mrs. Vaz came in the room holding a purse.

Mel: Oh dear she already left.

Flash: Whats wrong?

Mel: Tamaria left her bag, and she needs it....Flash can you take this to her.....

As she that I snatch the bag and headed out the door. Meanwhile I found her by the park, I ran her which it scared her. She then looks at me angery.

Tamaria: Flash.....what are you doin here?

Flash: You left you bag....your mom told me to give it to ya

she took the bag and said thanks, as she was about to leave, I ask her my I join her. She sigh and look at me and said yes, she turn away which I skeech yes and walk beside her. After awhile I tried to talk to her.

Flash: Ssssoooo um....Tamaria what kind of guy your into.

Tamaria: Why do you ask?

Flash: just courius, so can you tell me?

Tamaria: Well.....I really like skater boys

Flash: SKATER BOYS!

Tamaria: Whats wrong with skater boys, but mostly punk guys

Flash: oh.....*looks down* so ever thought about dating?

Tamaria:.......well sometimes, but I like to be alone.

Flash: Oh* ears drops*well when your ready maybe we can IDK go out sometimes?

Tamaria: *sigh* Flash, your a nice guy, but don't think we should.

Flash: why not?

Tamaria: 2 reason....my dad and my brother

Flash: Well I'am afraid of your dad but, Evain I guess he won't mind.

Tamaria: Seem like your really, want this.

Flash: * blush* Well yes.....I do

As we walk I then remember the rose I got her, I took it out and show it to her.

Flash: Here.......I saw this and thought of you.

Tamaira: *takes* oh.....how sweet of you Flash how did you know I like roses.

Flash: Just a lucky guess.

Later we made it to my place........Lily was there waiting.

Lily: Tamaria.....what took you so long

Flash: she was with me sis.

Tamaira: Sorry.......so thanks for walking me here.

Flash: Your welcome,......well see ya later

Tamaria: See ya

As I was about to go, my mom called. She came to me with her red dress.

Amy: Flash your farther said after you come home from Evains to meet him at your uncle Tails workshop.

Flash: Ok mom

Then she gave me a kiss on the cheek which was in front of the girls

Flash: MMMOOOOMMM!
©2008-2009 ~vasqueza93
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Author's Comments

well heres the first chapter hope ya'll like it.

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Aww, love for the next generation! ^w^ =D

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I :heart: this from when you first made the VERY first chapter to now. This is pure gold I tellz ya! :star::star::star: ***;p :hug::manhug::glomp::handshake::highfive: I never heard of someone making a POV from the Sonamy kid before EVUR!!! :excited::excited::excited: I love it too much...it's a addiction. ^^; LOL

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